Mudcat Café message #3304284

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Thread #143213 Message #3304284
Posted By: Keith A of Hertford
08-Feb-12 - 08:13 AM
Thread Name: Dick Miles, Just as the tide
Subject: RE: Dick Miles, Just as the tide

I always wondered what was meant by her colours changing.
A couple of quibbles, not intended as criticism of this lovely rendition.
The sailor was not spied. The narrator is the sailor.
Maid of honour flows smoother than Lady of Honour.