The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #146081   Message #3382894
Posted By: Charley Noble
28-Jul-12 - 07:41 PM
Thread Name: Mystery Chanty (1917)
Subject: RE: Mystery Chanty (1917)
Steve-

Here comes the Old Man looped to the gills,
His hands in his pockets and a mouth full of pills;
He's a-cussin' an' hollerin'; boys, he's raisin' hell,
We wish the mate would hurry up and strike, strike the bell!

This sounds better to me, no offense to "surely" intended.

Cheerily,
Charley Noble