Liland- If "sun" IS a change, I vote that it's a good one. The whole of that chorus is addressed to the Star: Brightest and best of the suns of the morning, Dawn on our darkness and lend us thine aid; Star in the east, the horizon adorning, Guide where our infant Redeemer is laid.

Also- the "Son of the morning" was (is?),I think, Lucifer!

Loved your song about the five historical ladies- certainly something to think on... Jean