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Thread #153923   Message #3608713
Posted By: GUEST,Phil at work
10-Mar-14 - 10:00 AM
Thread Name: Repeating the first verse at the end
Subject: RE: Repeating the first verse at the end
I think you need to listen to Young Hunting again, or at least have a look at the text. There's very little overlap between YH and TOK - certainly not enough to suggest hybridisation. Near the beginning of YH (not the tail end) a lady tries to get a talking bird onside by promising it a cage made of glittering gold, but (a) it's a fairly transparent ruse to kill the bird & (b) the bird doesn't fall for it. The only thing it has in common with the bargain at the end of TOK is the reference to a gold (and ivory) cage.

Nic Jones sang a version of TOK with a first-verse repeat on his second album ("And he's followed her up and he's followed her down", etc). I hadn't listened to that much folk when I first heard it, and it took me ages to work out what was going on ("he came back?"). I don't think the first-verse repeat works with ballads generally.