flattop,
I am shocked and appalled.

"piliosophies"???

"WyWoman"???

"tramatic"???

"Mississauga"??? Are you talking about the CITY or what? In Orillia, we have *Mississaga* street. He-llooo!

"feable"???

What is WITH the feeble non-excuse for real spelling?!!! I do hope you realize that you also are being graded? Although you are getting good points for originality, your poor spelling is really dragging your marks down. Please correct this in future installments of your story.

Amergin - While I'm on the subject of poor spelling: when you wrote "desparate", did you mean disparate or desperate? *g*