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Thread #162315   Message #3863097
Posted By: Nigel Parsons
27-Jun-17 - 07:47 AM
Thread Name: BS: the Oxford comma
Subject: RE: BS: the Oxford comma
The comma shouldn't be there because "and a retired schoolteacher" is not equal in status grammatically to the part of the sentence preceding it. Worse, you simply don't use it in a short "both-and" construction. It's plain wrong.

Take yer pick. I know which one I prefer.


Thank you. I can agree with that. Provided that the meaning is clear it's a matter of personal preference. I prefer the sentence as I originally punctuated it.