The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #164592   Message #3940592
Posted By: GUEST
31-Jul-18 - 08:45 AM
Thread Name: Would Love Some Feedback On New Song
Subject: RE: Would Love Some Feedback On New Song
I agree with the diction comments.

I try recording myself with ridiculously precise enunciation. On playback it sounds nothing like as silly as it feels in the mouth.
I then slacken it off till, I hope, I get a good compromise.

On 95% of live & recorded music I find the instruments mask hearing the words properly. It might be my old ears.
I prefer it when the voice is about twice the volume of the backing.

I love the line
"watch the world burn through my coffee steam"

[Could do with more pirates & death ... imho
;-) ]

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btw , lyrics are in the video description section