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Thread #49846 Message #4064886
Posted By: GUEST,Gerry
19-Jul-20 - 07:06 AM
Thread Name: DT Attribution & Minor Corrections PermaThread
Subject: RE: DT Attribution & Minor Corrections PermaThread
Some small corrections to Do You Think That I Do Not Know
1st stanza, line 7 "haunting" should be "halting"
2nd stanza, line 6 "dancer" should be "dancers" (and there shouldn't be an apostrophe after "row")
3rd stanza, line 3 "quavering" should be "quivering"
5th stanza, line 2 "scene was" should be "scenes were"; line 6 "She'll" should be "Shall"
My source is Poetical Works of Henry Lawson. There are a couple of other differences that are too small to mention.