The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #169133 Message #4087463
Posted By: The Sandman
11-Jan-21 - 03:35 AM
Thread Name: Sandman and Discussion of Dylan Songs
Subject: RE: Wiggle, Wiggle / Ballad in Plain D (Dylan)
In my experience music crtics state their opinion regardless of whether the artist gives a shit. Judging songwriting and songs is not a purely subjective opinion, some basic pointers Tell a unique story in your song Steer clear of cliché and overused metaphors Avoid common rhymes Make your point with as few lyrics as possible. So even the points made above are debatable, but songs can be judged on how well written they are and their melodies, and what they say or do not say. Let us take a better song by Bob Dylan How many roads must a man walk down Before you call him a man? How many seas must a white dove sail Before she sleeps in the sand? Yes, and how many times must the cannonballs fly Before they're forever banned? The answer, my friend, is blowin' in the wind The answer is blowin' in the wind Yes, and how many years must a mountain exist Before it is washed to the sea? And how many years can some people exist Before they're allowed to be free? Yes, and how many times can a man turn his head And pretend that he just doesn't see? The answer, my friend, is blowin' in the wind The answer is blowin' in the wind Yes, and how many times must a man look up Before he can see the sky? And how many ears must one man have Before he can hear people cry? Yes, and how many deaths will it take 'til he knows That too many people have died? The answer, my friend, is blowin' in the wind The answer is blowin' in the wind 1.rhe song has a good memorable melody 2 Is its message clear? mostly, yes let us compare it to a song written partly by Pete Seeger Lyrics Where have all the flowers gone? Long time passing. Where have all the flowers gone? Long time ago. Where have all the flowers gone? The girls have picked them every one. Oh, When will you ever learn? Oh, When will you ever learn? Young girls They've taken husbands every one. Young men They're all in uniform. Soldiers They've gone to graveyards every one. Graveyards They're covered with flowers every one. Flowers Young girls have picked them every one. Source: LyricFind Songwriters: Peter Seeger Where Have All the Flowers Gone lyrics © Concord Music Publishing LLC