Mudcat Café message #434960

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Thread #26954 Message #434960
Posted By: Joe Offer
06-Apr-01 - 09:00 PM
Thread Name: Help: when I was in my prime - symbolism
Subject: RE: Help: when I was in my prime - symbolism

I got a message from somebody, suggesting that "if I'm spared young year more" is incorrect and should be "spared for one year more." Sounds reasonable to me. Any other corrections? Do we have a tune, MMario?
-Joe Offer-