Bert & Peter T. Thanks v much for the comments. The dance she does badly is life in general, hence its only when she does the real dance that they see a glimse of how she should be dancing her life. I think. As regards a final verse - I tried!! But because it was a spontaneous song which doesn't make total coherent sense I couldn't write any more to fit it (as you say, it seems more like two unconnected things already). Anyway - its very useful to get an opinion to learn from for the future. Cheers

Kris