The version I had is much the same except where you have fellers I had "Peelers" which is a nickname for policemen named (I think) after Robert Peel the founder of the London Constabulary. Where you have Town O'Meara I have Connemara and I have Mullingar instead of Castlegar. I have "And the name of Paddy Mulligan caught the girl's of Ireland's eye" as the last line.

Otherwise its the same.

Frank Phillips