I could use an explanatory footnote to the first line of your poem, tex.
"You kow" Now, this might me a typo for "You know", or it might me directed at kat/katlaughing, which would be linguistically quite clever, but very insulting and in dreadfully poor taste, or it might be directed at me, in which case I will refrain from taking umbrage on the grounds that I have been called much worse in my time.

Murray