Ebbie - your song is lovely and it made me smile. So if that's a navel-gazer then they ain't all bad! It does communicate I'd say - because it rings bells and paints pictures. So then it would be good to sing it for other people surely? Though some songs are nice to keep just for yourself aren't they. I think it would draw nods of recognition and agreement, and I know a lot of people that would like it (especially mothers....).