The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #9055   Message #58315
Posted By: Barbara
12-Feb-99 - 12:37 PM
Thread Name: Dainty Davey: What's a curly pow?
Subject: RE: Dainty Davey: What's a curly pow?
Andreas, was this translation done or the words created by a speaker-of-some-language-other-than-English?
I think maybe the verse should be something like "Oh my love, my love briny.." which would match the longing for the sea. (briny=salty) In the rhyme scheme of your version, the first and third lines rhyme, so the first line should rhyme with "country".
Blessings,
Barbara