The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #45039   Message #666170
Posted By: DMcG
10-Mar-02 - 06:31 AM
Thread Name: Awkward rhymes
Subject: RE: Awkward rhymes
"Sometimes rhymes may look clumsy or awkward in print, but work brilliantly in the song" - or the opposite:

So I'll to down to some lonesome garden
where no man on earth may there me FIND
Where the pretty little song-birds do change their voices
And every moment blows blusterous WIND

Oops!