Thanks for all good thoughts! With so many great musicians around here it's a bit intimidating to put one's stuff out there-- even if one isn't quite sure where it came from or whether to take credit... But it's also the perfect place for collaborations of this kind.

Morticia, I'm always glad to share-- When the tune thing is sorted out I'll let you know...

Thanks for the footnotes on "shoon"-- it is archaic, but it rhymes better?

Bekki