Mudcat Café message #810313

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Thread #52848 Message #810313
Posted By: Clinton Hammond
24-Oct-02 - 01:44 PM
Thread Name: Lyr Add: wrote this for a friend (Memories Stay)
Subject: RE: BS: wrote this for a friend

Ya... nice... but I agree... the 2nd verse is out of place... maybe try some circumlocution... talk about it, without stating it directly...