The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #52848 Message #810419
Posted By: Amos
24-Oct-02 - 04:15 PM
Thread Name: Lyr Add: wrote this for a friend (Memories Stay)
Subject: RE: BS: wrote this for a friend
Amergin:
Wind is hardly ever thought of as "stout". You could call it "stark" and rhyme it with "turned that burning candle dark..." or "bold and cold, or grim and dim, or shift it around some other way.