Very nice, Steve! I can hear a traditional tune ringing in my ears, or was that the gentle clank of cow bells? You might smooth out that arkward last line; I'm sure you could consolidate it by a word or two.

I still have this persistent vision of the Swiss team practicing their teamwork while tobogganing wildly down the Alps:

Swing 'er round, boys!
Mains'l haul!

Cheerily,
Charley Noble