I like it, duuuude! And just thinkin ... if you're concerned about what Jeri said re "Evildoer" (I tend to agree), then maybe "Powermonger" would work?

Also, the third line "Your ways are ruthless, not carin what people are prayin", might be easier to sing (rhythmically) if you used the one-syllable word "folk" or "we" instead of "people".

You go, duuuude ... day job or no!

daylia