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Thread #6412 Message #974242
Posted By: Jim Dixon
29-Jun-03 - 12:47 PM
Thread Name: Tune Req: Mairi Bhan Og
Subject: Lyr Add: MAIRI BHAN OG / FAIR YOUNG MARY
The above poem has a very unusual and complex internal rhyme scheme. Here's another copy of the song arranged to emphasize the meter and rhyme:
My love to my bride / with dear caresses, And pride, / shall ever be shown, Each virtue most rare / her soul possesses, And fair / and sweet has she grown. My thoughts used to rove / in boyish folly Ere ever her love / I'd known, But now I'm her own, / my heart is wholly My darling's alone, / alone.
Where woodlands are green / with trees well nourished A scene / of beauty to view, I found with delight / one stem that flourish'd, Of bright / and beautiful hue: That bough from above, / desiring greatly, Unto me with love / I drew; None else could that tree / have mov'd so stately. 'Twas only for me / [that] it grew.
In the version that lesley posted above (which was apparently copied and pasted from http://www.contemplator.com/folk/maribhan.html), the pattern breaks down in the last few lines. I have restored what I think was the intended pattern by moving a few words around. Now it scans perfectly, but I'm still a bit dissatisfied with the result. "So stately" would make more sense modifying "tree" than "mov'd".