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23 Dec 02 - 09:00 PM (#852870) Subject: Help me write a song From: Jeep man Folks, I need help in writing a Sugar Babe song that I can perform at a family get together. There are lots of verses to this old song, but this one has a twist. Sugar Babe is a dog! Lately Sugar won't sleep on his bed, stays out until all hours, getting fat and lazy. Melody will be just standard old blues stuff. Last verse reveals that she is a Cocker Spaniel. Sugar Babe whats the matter with you? Don't you love me like you used to do? Sugar Babe, is it all over now? Sugar Babe whats the matter with you Are you running around with somebody new Oh Sugar Babe, is it all over now. Any help will be appreciated. How about you Jerry R.? Thanks, Jeep Sugar Babe, whats the matter with you Are you running around with somebody new? Oh Sugar Babe is it all over now? |
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23 Dec 02 - 09:27 PM (#852882) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: Jeep man I didn't do a good job presenting this. Sorry. The hook to all this is that Sugar Babe is pregnant. Jim |
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23 Dec 02 - 09:43 PM (#852886) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: Jerry Rasmussen Seems like I already got in trouble on this one once, Jeep.. Funny, the women didn't complain when Elvis was singing about a Hound Dog that was a man. But then, we ain't Elvis. I'll have to think on this one for a minute, Jeepman. Don't want to be accused of being sexist..:-) Jerry |
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23 Dec 02 - 09:43 PM (#852887) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: Jeep man Jerry R. sent me this the last time I tried this thread. Sugar Babe you just wasting my time all you do is sit and whine Sugar babe whats the matter with you Looks like you've been eatin for two. Jeep |
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23 Dec 02 - 09:49 PM (#852888) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: katlaughing Sugar Babe say ya didn't love me true? Ya been towning around with somebody new? Sugar Babe, you sure are looking round! Feel free to dump these. It sounds like a really fun song to do. Keep going...I like what you have! |
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23 Dec 02 - 09:58 PM (#852891) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: katlaughing Sugar Babe, you sure are looking fine But I got a feelin' you ain't mine No, mo', no mo', Sugar Babe's gone. |
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23 Dec 02 - 10:58 PM (#852897) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: Jeep man Keep it up folks. Its getting good. Jim |
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23 Dec 02 - 11:16 PM (#852907) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: Amos Oh, Sugar Babe, why can't you act nice, Got a bun in the oven and it's startin' to rise Oh, Sugar Babe, cant you turn that damper down? Sugar Babe, you been making eyes, Now you swole to twice yore size, Tell me, who's the new dog in your town? A |
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23 Dec 02 - 11:35 PM (#852914) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: Bobert Sugar Babe, don't look that way Yeah, Sugar Babe don't look that way Beggin' you, baby, beggin' you to stay Ain't no one gonna love ya like I can do No one's gonna love you ike I can do 'Cause no one's like me one's like you Yeah, Sugar, you gotta know ya' gotta stay Lord, Sugar, ya' know ya' gotta stay 'Cause I'm lovin' you gal, Sugar Babe Hey, you said it was blues.... Bobert |
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23 Dec 02 - 11:43 PM (#852917) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: Genie A couple of possible verses: Sugar Babe, there's talk you roll over too quick For any guy in pants with a great big stick. Any shepherd or boxer or even the boy next door. I thought you was true, a man's best friend, Now it looks you done gone 'round the bend. Some say you're a bitch, some say you're just a ... free spirit. And an orphan couplet: You're guilt-trippin' me with those big eyes of brown, Beggin' for me to take you out. |
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24 Dec 02 - 12:22 AM (#852939) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: Cluin How about a bridge: Who's a big baby? Who's a big ol' baby, now? Who's a poochy poochy poochy poo? Awwwwwwwwwwww....... |
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24 Dec 02 - 12:48 AM (#852942) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: Cluin Hard to know how the scansion on this should go but, guitar in hand, these fell out: Sugar Babe... oh don't you remember when? No, you couldn't get enough; wanted it again and again Sugar Babe, is it all over now? Sugar Babe... I'm-a worried `bout you You don't wanna do all the things we used to do Sugar Babe, is it all over now? Sugar Babe... Don't you hear what I say? You just ain't yourself, I hate to see you this way Oh Sugar Babe, (spoken) I think maybe it's time to change to that special kibble for older dogs, whattaya think? Yeah... |
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24 Dec 02 - 06:27 PM (#853303) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: Jeep man This is getting good! Cluin, I think you might have experienced this. You write well. I will try to get everyone's stuff into it, at least one verse. A few more to choose from and I will be happy. I will send the finished song to the forum. We'll all take credit. Merry Christmas from Jeepman. |
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26 Dec 02 - 08:31 PM (#853837) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: Cluin Many times, Jeep man. |
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27 Dec 02 - 02:21 PM (#854170) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: allanwill Sugar Babe, Sugar Babe, where do you roam: I used to call your name and you'd come, you'd come, running on home. Allan |
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27 Dec 02 - 04:10 PM (#854213) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: CraigS Hey, it doesn't have to be Sugar Babe, does it Honey Chile, Sugar Doll, Honey Lamb? Sugar Babe, I'm watching you grow Found you've got to reap what you sow Sugar Babe, I'm telling you true No more doggin' round for you .... very trad! |
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28 Dec 02 - 01:41 AM (#854417) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: Genie You slip me the tongue ev' time we kiss, It may be puppy love, Babe, but I tell you this: The way you shake yo' tail's boun' to bring me to my knees! Well, Sugar Babe, y'know it's a crime to litter, But you're so dog-gone sweet, I just can't be bitter, Even though you run around like a tramp out on the street. |
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28 Dec 02 - 02:35 PM (#854631) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: Rustic Rebel Sugar babe, what's wrong with your noodle? You've pushed me aside for some other poodle. Oh sugar babe, it's all over now. Sugar babe you just went out for awhile You come back home with a big toothy smile. Oh sugar babe it is all over now. Sugar babe,your making me a fool I ain't kissin' your mouth with all that drool. Oh sugar babe, it's all over now. Peace , Rustic |
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28 Dec 02 - 03:48 PM (#854662) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: GUEST,Nick Sugar babeI found out you been running with every Tom, DIck and Daniel. Sugar BabeI found out you're just a pregnant Cocker Spaniel. Nick |
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28 Dec 02 - 10:44 PM (#854819) Subject: RE: Help me write a song From: Genie Some of us are getting just plain silly! |