22 Jul 03 - 11:45 AM (#988164) Subject: RE: Origins: A methodology for dating songs etc. From: IanC Bruce I'm grateful for the correction. The principle remains unaltered. :-) |
28 Jul 03 - 05:04 AM (#991817) Subject: RE: Origins: A methodology for dating songs etc. From: Hrothgar Ian, I'm sorry to hear that your wife is allergic to Abednegos. :-) |
04 Aug 03 - 04:03 AM (#996273) Subject: RE: Origins: A methodology for dating songs etc. From: IanC Kevin That's why TAQ/TPQ is so important. :-) |
04 Aug 03 - 11:08 AM (#996476) Subject: RE: Origins: A methodology for dating songs etc. From: IanC Billy It was probably "Bendigo's Sermon" by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. It's available by following the pages here. It has been set to music, hence the guitar chords. :-) PS I don't think we need to spend too much time on what I originally put in as an example of a major methodological pitfall anyway ... I wasn't expecting to draw any conclusions from it, just to show what damage some assumptions can make. One or two of you seem not to have read the original post!!! Perhaps Greg's got it right, though I suspect that Dido's a later insertion anyway. Anyone care to speculate in the relationship between Dido and Bendigo? BTW the Duke of Buckingham might be held to be ubiquituous to this song (he's in all the versions I've come across so far, up to the earliest recorded here), in which case it might prove indicative of a likely TPQ date. Here, I should say that it's often important to speculate and not be too worried when people show that you're wrong. It's near impossible to progress knowledge without getting it wrong occasionally; all that's needed is a little humility. ;-) |
08 Sep 03 - 12:16 PM (#1014818) Subject: The Black Velvet Band I - Origins From: IanC Setting up a Chronological Sequence
We have already established that "The Black Velvet Band" began life as a Broadside Ballad between 1837 and 1845. A transcription of the Swindells version is here:
A - Broadside printed by Swindells
However, as I've already suggested, it doesn't appear to have survived into the oral tradition in that form - unless the following, rather cryptic, entry in Steve Roud's index provides more information (Peta Webb of the RVWML has confirmed that this appears, in fact, to be a word-for-word copy of the broadside version though it may well have been collected from a singer, provenance unknown.).
BLACK VELVET BAND, THE; ; ; To go in a smack down to Barking; Index to MS collection; Alfred Williams MS No.Mi.535 (Bathe/Clissold Index); ; ; ; ; Williams, Alfred; Reference only; 930727; 2146; ; ; ; ; ; =Pkt.30
The main elements of the story in the broadside versions can be summarised as follows.
19th Century broadside versions are widespread, mainly from London printers such as J. Paul, T. Birt, H. Such , Disley, W. S. Fortey, Ryle, and Edwards but also, well before the end of the century, from other cities including Manchester (Swindells), Birmingham (Pratt), Glasgow and Dublin. This wide spread indicates that the song was popular and this is emphasised by the fact that copies of broadsides appear as far afield as Canada and Australia. Inspection of the broadside versions reveals that they are uniformly similar except for what might be expected from the typographical license common to broadside printers.
Note. Since verses in traditional versions of the song are often half the length of those in the broadside version, I have used the letters a and b to denote the first and second halves of verses in the broadside where relevant. Thus, lines 1 and 2 of verse 6 is described as verse 6a and lines 3 and 4 of verse 2 are called 2b. Half-verses not described in the broadside versions are denoted Xx. Setting up a Chronological Sequence The story is shortened into a fast flowing series of actions (meeting, theft, arrest and judgement) from what is originally a sequence of separate actions joined by descriptive narrative. The supernumary character of the “bold man of war’s man” is removed, along with a most of the, essentially redundant, descriptive elements. An act of theft from a “gentleman” is introduced, so that meeting and theft are simultaneous and arrest and judgement follows swiftly after. A moral is sometimes appended (which might be loosely based on Verse 5a of the broadside, though such verses are commonplace). A chorus is developed from the second half of verse two. The combination of the two developments leaves a song of the same length or slightly shorter as the verses, without the chorus, become half the length of those in the broadside version. I have, as yet found only one version which does not have the chorus. This was collected by Peter Kennedy from Bill Cameron in 1956. B - Kennedy, Peter "Folksongs of Britain and Ireland" (1975) page 695 (no. 313) Bill was a member of St Mary’s Lifeboat crew in Scilly and learned the song from Tommy Crocker, a fireman on board the “Lioness” (probably the Lyonesse), a mail ship which ran from Penzance to Scilly, before World War I. This version is essentially verses 1 and 2 of the broadside, followed by verse 6a/7b and finally Xx/8b (the final verse beginning with an invented half verse). Line 1 of verse 1 has been amended to localise the song in Belfast and the reference to Ratcliffe Highway has been removed from line 2 of verse 2. Verses 3, 4 and 5 – largely descriptive, but with some action – have been omitted. There are a number of other minor amendments, either to remove the criminal argot or to make more sense of the action, and the end of verse 8 is heavily modified. The supernumary character remains, though he has changed his role a little and, as in the broadside, there is no theft incident. The version makes rather less sense overall than the original. There are several mondegreens, in particular line 3 of verse 1 where “At length future prospects were blighted, as soon you may all understand,” becomes “Till my future prospects belated, Which gave me to understand,” and line 1 of verse 6 where “For she towed in a bold man-of-war's man ...” becomes “O one evening a flash-man a watchman ...”. Notably, the girl’s eyes – described in the original as “black as a raven” are now described as having “shone like diamonds”. While the song has already undergone quite a lot of modification, both intentionally and accidentally, the direct relationship with the broadside version remains undeniable. |
08 Sep 03 - 12:16 PM (#1014819) Subject: The Black Velvet Band III – Traditional Versions From: IanC Setting up a Chronological Sequence
Study of the overall story should provide a long-term overview of how a song develops because, despite changes in details, the story elements are usually very stable over time. A relatively simple method would be to precis the story of each version independently and then compare the elements of each.
Study of key words and phrases is almost the opposite of studying the story. This provides details as to how the most ephemeral parts of a song change with time.
Study of a distinctive sample gives a compromise between the two approaches above, providing both continuity and the potential for fairly rapid change. In the case of the Black Velvet Band, the most obvious sample to study is the chorus (verse 2b), which is both distinctive and common to all versions.
The basis of the chorus is verse 2b of the broadside version (A), as follows.
Her eyes were as black as a raven,
Even before this has developed into the chorus, the most distinctive change, in the first line, has already been made (B), resulting in the following, which is only essentially identical in line 2.
O her eyes they shone like diamonds
Choruses from the following versions have been successively compared with the two above, and with each other (the fragment F does not include these lines).
C - Seeger & MacColl, "The Singing Island" (1960) page 82 (No. 75)
The result of these comparisons can be summarised as follows.
Version C follows B in lines 1 and 3 and A in line 4. In line 2, however, "pride"(A/B) has become "queen", in line 3 "hung down o'er"(B) has become "hung over" and "tied with" (A) has become "tied up with".
Version D follows B in line 1 and A in lines 3 and 4. In line 3, however, "her hair, that did hang o'er" (A) has become "the hair that hung down on".
Version E is fairly idiosyncratic. Line 1 adapts B, with "they shone like diamonds" becoming "were like two shining diamonds". Line 2 is clearly related to C, adapting "I thought her the queen of the land" to "they called her the queen of our land". Line 3 is most similar to D, though "hung over" (C) replaces "down on" (D). Finally, line 4 is the same as A.
Version G is very similar to B in lines 1 and 2, with only "shine" in line 1 for "shone" (B). Lines 3 and 4, however, are exactly as C.
Version H shows signs of rewriting, "velvet" being replaced by "ribbon" in line 4 (otherwise as C) and line 3 being completely rewritten as "with her hair thrown over her shoulders". Line 1 is, however, exactly as B and line 2 suggests C, "I thought her the queen" being replaced by "you would think she was queen".
This initial analysis allows us, from the available information, to draw up a sequence of styles. These can be defined, with dependencies, as follows.
Style 0 is congruent with the broadside version.
Style 1, developed from style 0, is characterised by the change from the eyes being described as "black as a raven" to shining "like diamonds". Versions B, D and G are examples of this style.
Style 2 is developed from style 1. It includes the eyes shining like diamonds, but the girl is thought of as "the queen of the land" instead of "the pride of the land". Versions C and E are examples of this style.
Style 3 is developed from style 2. This appears to involve a significant rewrite, and is characterised by "velvet" becoming "ribbon". Version H is an example of this style. |
09 Sep 03 - 03:53 AM (#1015254) Subject: RE: Origins: A methodology for dating songs etc. From: IanC Kevin We have. Believe me. Ian |
09 Sep 03 - 05:18 PM (#1015743) Subject: RE: Origins: A methodology for dating songs etc. From: Art Thieme He was actually the only guy I ever knew who had a wooden leg from the knee up. Art |
02 Oct 03 - 01:50 PM (#1028126) Subject: RE: Origins: A methodology for dating songs etc. From: McGrath of Harlow I'd just take it that the lady with the black velvet band is being transported too. |