Hey LH, How about a surprise ending? Why not a surprise ending? In fact, a tale with the correct amount of revenge would have that chief shipbuilder strolling down to the drydock and getting wacked in the head with a spanner - none of the hordes of innocent ticket purchasers getting soaked in the north atlantic. What kind of a bitter ole man are you turning into, wanting thousands to die in the sea while begrudging them a bit of passion? f,
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