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Pelrad Feedback please ona song attempt (19) RE: Feedback please ona song attempt 09 Sep 99

Excellent, Barry. Stands on its own as a strong and moving poem, and I think with a tune it would be downright chilling.

I agree, howevr, with what a few others have said, it could use a stronger end verse. Can you write one more?

I think you have enough in the song that it stands alone, without excessive explanation.

Now I'll have to be sure to meet up with you soon; I want to hear this song.


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