Magnificent thread! Since the original post solicited recent songs, how 'bout some help/comment/criticism (pm or otherwise) (or maybe even a title?) for a (c) work in progress? Did 'ja hear my daddy was an engineer Down the Eastern Seaboard Line Smoke and steam and a Georgia Dream And a baby got left behind When he went through -- and the whistle blew My momma she went to cookin' and we Moved further down the track In the smoke and damp of the labor camps And we never did look back 'Til she was gone -- and I went on Well, I headed west in the summer time Gonna see if I could find my way Through the B & O and the U.P., Atchison, Topeka and the Santa Fe And the Burlington -- and the Erie Lackawana When I'm laying awake at midnight I hear the lonesome sound One 'a these days it'll get in my ear And I'm gonna blow this town Go back out -- to where I been (or maybe alternatively??) Laying awake at midnight I can hear that lonesome song You wake up alone some morning, baby Then you'll know that I'll be gone But won't you please think well of me Now when I'm through my ramblin' I wouldn't want anybody sad Just tell all my good-time friends It was a pleasure being had But when I'm gone -- party on! (call me old enough to remember the sound of a Santa Fe coal-burner steaming through town on a summer's night)
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