Silly me, i liked both of them. Only real comments i can make are two: Drop the profanity.....song is powerful, and that just weakens it. And rather than psuedo-fanity, i would go for a descriptive word, like "dirty" , 'filthy" or something along those lines.
Liked the second song equally well.......think alot of people have been there.
Comment number two: try really hard to have a good melody on these. We have loads of singer-songwriters in our neck of the woods, and that seems to be the week link. If it is poetry with music in the background, fine. If it is a song, you should be able to whistle the melody.
Good work!