CapriUni! Hi! Haven't given this the attention it deserves or listened to it yet - but my initial impressions. yup - there's something "off" about the first verse but I can't figure it out. My inclination as things are would be to move the first verse and make it the FINAL verse. The only other thing I saw immediatley is that I think "Their weight and worth the measure of a friend" might have more impace as "Their weight and worth true measure of a friend"