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User Name | Thread Name | Subject | Posted |
Dave Wynn | Let's write a song together! (81* d) | RE: Let's write a song together! | 22 Feb 07 |
I wouldn't say flawed Jim Lad, in three days you have a song that just needs a tune and possibly a refrain. At the risk of getting cut up I would suggest that Swallow is substituted for Sparrow and walking on broken glass I would re-arrange the first line of the last verse to read "So now I'll say goodbye ,my love" (dunno why) |