I'm kind of a socialist (quite different from a communist), atheist, humanist, tolerant, liberal person myself and found your song to be a bit disturbing. Which is probably what you were shooting for. There seems to be a lot of anger behind the lyrics and I'm not sure who you are angry with. If it were mine I would try to focus the lyrics more clearly to convey my ultimate message to the listeners. Thanks for sharing your song Dean. I always find original music worth examining. Mike PS: Some of my lyrics can be found at my lyrics page. Feel free to critique them if you wish.
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