Joe,
I expect to have time this weekend to work on the lyrics some more. (Last weekend I had out of town guests, and I've still been catching up on things all week.) I'll post whatever final version I come up with, although I'm not sure it will be complete. Looks like Gerry and I are both still stumbling over some of the phrases.

It occurred to me that there are a few people I could ask locally who might be able to help or might have written references for the lyrics, and I'll be seeing them at various points over the next few weeks. So, hopefully, at some point I'll have a full version. I've added the thread to my tracer and will repost again either sooner or later, as things work out. Thanks for your interest.

Zhenya