Lol c'mon it was a first take rehearsal lol. It will tighten up but I dont want to tighten it too much. I like some looseness to it. By some peoples standards the sound and feel I want is barely functioning lol. Almost like a car that is bogging down and your nervous it is going to just quit but it keeps going. The feeling of being uncertain and a little on edge adds to the melancholy feel I want it to have. Come on man I dont like conventional pretty things lol. It is all about mood and emotion. You know what I am talking about your my brother. I am rambling lol I know what you were saying I just got to rambling about my vision of what I am wanting the song to feel like. You know me man I get lost in thought when I am thinking about where I want something to go lol
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