I hope your pal appreciates the amount of hard work you're putting in to this, DrugCrazed, and that you get a few shandies out of this. And I think the fact that that you had to ask whether it was legible suggests that you already suspected the answer!

That font works much better. I know it's not as fancy, but it's legible most of the time. There are still points, however, where it starts to disappear. White on yellow is never really going to work well, but as the other colours in the background are dark, you probably wouldn't get away with a dark font colour, either. I do appreciate the problem you've got.

The only suggestion I can make is to use a darker colour for the text and fade the background, or put a semi-transparent panel behind the text. But it's coming together well.

Oh, one more thing I've just spotted - Sheffield Folk Choral appears again on the final page, rather than Chorale.