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beachcomber | Lyr Req: walkin down the line (17) | RE: Lyr Req: walkin down the line | 03 May 12 |
In the verse "See the mornin' light" Isn't it better to repeat that line just once and continue "An' it's not...etc " ?? It fits the meter better IMO ? |