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User Name | Thread Name | Subject | Posted |
BobKnight | Dowie Dens of Yarrow (35) | RE: Dowie Dens of Yarrow | 28 May 14 |
Leeneia. If you remove "that" from the last line it will scan better. It's one of those words that people stick in all the time when they are writing songs, and nine times out of ten it can be dispensed with. |