The only major change I could find would be is to change this line: And my hair thin falls watching Cowan's braw And by the Union Jack to And my hair thin falls watching callants braw Stand by a Union Jack 'Callant Braw' is a Scots term often found in music and literature to describe a fine, young man. Changing 'and' to 'stand' makes sense of the lines. As I listened to the song several times Alistair could be singing either word. Thanks again, Mudcatters. Catriona
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