Bad rhymes work well in comic songs IMHO,and apparently this is one of my biggest sins!And I'll overuse them as often as I like! e.g. in my "Puffin Song": Six, seven, eight, nine, ten or more, his beak is heavy laden, It's even harder now to fly, when he is just so weighed-down. Or rhyming "Royal" with "Coyal" (call) And I do love internal rhymes as in the post by Donuel above: Robin Laing has a good few examples in his songs,e.g, in "Punters": And the rats and the voles went back into their holes for some paracetamols.
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