The chorus has no umph If the music has a melody and a counter melody to the same chord progression, you could sing the chorus on top of the last four lines of the six line stanza with good effect. (louder each time) Where everything isn't meant to be OK Television dreams of tomorrow We're not the ones who're meant to follow For that's enough to argue (vague - nonsensical - awkward without resolution) how about an easier clearer positive chorus to sing and remember They will tell you who and what to fear They will tell you when the coast is clear They only look at their bottom line think for yourself and you'll be fine steal a fav chord progression and you got a kick ass song. oh, its done already, I'll get me hat.
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