You clearly have potential, and you're still young.
The song seems too monotonous - unless justified by the lyrics, of which I hardly understand a word. Some variation, if only in the accompaniment, would be a plus.
Watch what the others do, and please don't focus on Bob Dylan - that job is taken once for all!
You seem to be a US citizen of Italian descent - perfect in terms of image.
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