Nigel, Thanks for your suggestions. I do have the tune in my head and have no problem fitting in the words I posted but I like what you've done. I do have to get rid of beginning the first verse with "For four..." Ugh! For the cynics in this world, they can always create new verses to the old 1960s parody "We Shall All Succumb." We shall run in fear....etc. Cheerily, Charlie Ipcar, aka Charley Noble
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