Also I have re-ordered the paragraphs so that the article corresponds a bit more closely with "typical" Wikipedia style, and flows better (to my eye). Again one must expect others to chip in and further adjust anything one writes, once the initial words have been written (they may or may not survive into the long term, but hopefully an improved version will...). Sometimes if the changes are significant, they will be discussed on the accompanying article "talk" page (in this case: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Steve_Roud) but for simple stylistic or minor editorial changes this is not normally required. - Tony
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