Here are the corrections as I hear them. (The replacement of ha' with hall is debatable; the ending of the word is very soft and it could be ha', it just that hall rhymes better with the definite befall of the previous line).

Mick

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Young
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When this ring grows pale and wan
It's then that you'll know me love is gone
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What news, what news old man doth befall
It's none save the wedding in the king's own hall
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Oh it's when he came to the king's own gate
He's sought there a drink for the bridegroom's sake
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Oh got ye this by the sea or the land?
Or took ye this from a dead man's hand?
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