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Thread #63271 Message #1026476
Posted By: Nathan in Texas
29-Sep-03 - 10:05 PM
Thread Name: Self-proclaiming songs that can't exist
Subject: RE: Self-proclaiming songs that can't exist
HOw about Marty Robbins' "El Paso" It starts in with the narrator using the past tense ... Out in the West Texas town of El Paso I fell in love with a Mexican girl
... Switches to present: ...
It's been so long since I've seen the young maiden My love is stronger than my fear of death ... Back to past . . . . I saddled up and away I did go Riding alone in the dark ... Present....
Maybe tomorrow a bullet will find me Tonight nothing's worse than this pain in my heart
present, some time later...
And at last here I am on the hill overlooking El Paso I can see Rosa's cantina below My love is strong and it pushes me onward Down off the hill to Felina I go
Off to my right I see five mounted cowboys Off to my left ride a dozen or more Shouting and shooting, I can't let them catch me I have to make it to Rosa's back door
Something is dreadfully wrong, for I feel A deep burning pain in my side Though I am trying to stay in the saddle I'm getting weary, unable to ride But my love for Felina is strong and I rise where I've fallen Though I am weary I can't stop to rest I see the white puff of smoke from the rifle I feel the bullet go deep in my chest . . . Present, after being shot and before dying
From out of nowhere Felina has found me Kissing my cheek as she kneels by my side Cradled by two loving arms that I'll die for One little kiss, then Felina goodbye.