The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #65391 Message #1082388
Posted By: Little Hawk
30-Dec-03 - 11:17 AM
Thread Name: Chongo Chimp, Primate Eye (story)
Subject: RE: Chongo Chimp, Primate Eye (story)
Fan-freakin'-tastic! Chongo went ape when he read that one. Awright!!! Captain Chaos, you are in. We was wonderin' when Drecker would show up...love the bit about the King. "Dick Tracie"? Stroke of genius. Don't fahget yer paragraph breaks next time. Some of these coconut pickers got a low attention span and they need the breaks to stay focused.
Lissen, folks...I figure Drecker is the type that's gotta stay alive to the end of this tale too...so keep it in mind. He's got a long professional association with Chongo and it ain't gonna end here. Besides, any guy that drives a banana yellow 1933 Cadillac has just got too much class to quit.