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Thread #68002 Message #1141440
Posted By: Q (Frank Staplin)
19-Mar-04 - 10:59 PM
Thread Name: Lyr Add: Hell's Pavement (John Masefield sea poem)
Subject: RE: Lyr Add: Hell's Pavement (Masefield sea poem)
First person does seem better. Now why didn't Masefield think of that?
Makes a nice story. Is there a better word for the 'official'? There should be a good slang term for the paymaster, etc.