what mate .I'm waiting on you?
you got me reviving this song now.
Tell me when your ready for the next lesson or have you got it?


no comma after 'find' my fingers slipped!!


next 2nd verse satrts

'Jo so seldom wrote, that when she got the note'
She thought that it must be,
A letter from some chinee.
Wrote in french and spelt in russian.
She tried splitting it,
Even tried knitting it,
She gave up in dismay,
She put it on a gramaphone , and it began to play../..


Dear Mathilda etc

verse 3 to come

i think I got the commas right this time teach!

helps with revision