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Thread #69121 Message #1172790
Posted By: Barbara
27-Apr-04 - 08:04 PM
Thread Name: Martin Said to His Man
Subject: RE: Martin said to his man
Charley, I don't know about the provenance of that verse, though I could suspect yourself as the author, sounds just like your kind of silliness, and it doesn't scan. Or at least you really have to work to get three sylables per note. It is fun, though. Possibly if you drop the "Saw" off the dragonfly part, you don't end up sounding like your mouth is quite so full of feathers.