The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #71965   Message #1236837
Posted By: Amos
29-Jul-04 - 11:53 PM
Thread Name: Song Challenge: Ship in Limbo!
Subject: RE: SONG CHALLENGE: Ship in Limbo!
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I THINK IT AN EXCELLENT START!!

It has a recurring refrain and a fine chian of connections verse to verse. Nicel y crafted!!

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