The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #67948 Message #1254333
Posted By: beardedbruce
23-Aug-04 - 06:18 AM
Thread Name: BS: In every thread someone has to be last!
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last!
BDiBR,
Needs a lot of work on scansion - (Iambic pentameter)... and the rhymes need work... But I like the "petrified heart".
Blackcatter:
Good idea on the sermon... see my post of 05 May 04 - 04:46 AM